BRISA SYLVESTRE
Congratulations! Finishing a screenplay is a tremendous milestone and worthy of celebration! The most challenging part of writing is sitting down with an empty page, and putting your vision into words, countless times over until you have a piece of work. If you haven't yet, take time to thank yourself for your commitment to the process; bake a cake, pop champagne, pop champagne whilst baking a cake. You get the picture.
For every writer, producer, studio executive, and more, feedback is an important part of the creative story. Creatives should have the opportunity to see how their script compares within the current creative market and be given crucial feedback that can help elevate their writing to its highest potential.
Coverage provides:
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Constructive feedback relating to plot, characters, structure, tone, dialogue, and theme
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Actionable insights into what will help strengthen the script
Scripts are read in entirety, and custom notes provided, no AI is used in the feedback process.
MEET YOUR READER
Brisa lives in her hometown in Massachusetts and has read for major film festivals in the U.S., training has trained extensively as a script reader, and coverage writer. She brings her experience with The Second City and the Magnet theater in screenplay writing, writing for late night TV, writing web series, writing for TV and Film, satirical writing, acting and stand up.
Brisa's comedic writing has been published on satirical outlets such as McSweeney's Internet Tendency, The Hard Times, Humor Darling, Weekly Humorist, The Boston Accent & more. She has been featured in the Burbank Comedy Festival, National Ladies of Laughter Competition in NY, and the Salem Comedy festival for her stand up.
Before all this, Brisa worked for a Big 4 advisory firm as a senior desktop publisher and designer where she honed her editing and publishing skills with projects appearing in places like The Wall Street Journal, before she left that world to pursue her passions - comedy, writing & film.
Why am I telling you all this? No reason I just needed someone to talk to. I'm just kidding... Because background is important when a reader reviews your scripts, real life experiences bring a layer of authenticity to your work and Brisa's background and life experiences help shape the work she does.
Screenplay Offerings
Screenplay Analysis
Unlock the potential of your screenplay with an in-depth reading and analysis. A meticulous review of the script provides actionable feedback on plot, characters, dialogue, and structure. This comprehensive evaluation will help you understand where your screenplay stands creatively and prepare it for submission to festivals. Elevate your storytelling and ensure your script resonates with audiences and readers alike.
Screenplay Coverage
The script coverage service offers a comprehensive analysis for writers and producers, featuring a concise 1-2 page synopsis that captures the core of the story. Strengths of the screenplay are highlighted as well as areas for improvement and further development are identified within the story. You'll receive essential insights to refine and elevate your storytelling. The script coverage and synopsis process will assist you in expressing your vision with clarity and effectiveness.
Unlock Your Screenplay's Potential with Expert Feedback and Coverage
The advantages of receiving feedback on your screenplay:
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Feedback on your screenplay is essential for honing your craft and improving your storytelling.
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Provides fresh perspectives that can uncover blind spots and strengthen your narrative.
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Constructive criticism helps you identify areas for improvement, ensuring your screenplay resonates with audiences.
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Embracing constructive feedback ultimately elevates your work to its highest potential.
Screenplay feedback offers a valuable opportunity to assess your script within the creative community. It provides actionable insights to improve your structure, characters, dialogue, plot, and overall story before you submit to festivals or producers.
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Script coverage offers writers and producers a thorough assessment of their screenplay, aiding producers in deciding whether to advance with a project. It highlights the screenplay's strengths and weaknesses, offering insights into areas needing further development.
What You Will Receive:
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Screenplay Feedback: 1-3 pages of evaluations covering plot, character, world-building, dialogue, structure, and overall feedback, along with a logline.
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Script Coverage: 1-3 pages of detailed evaluation and a 1-2 page story synopsis, providing insights into the current status of your screenplay.
Sample coverage available on request.
